martin54 wrote:Chris, constructive criticism. Firstly yes it wasn’t a great time to launch but we don’t always have control over such things. I think you really need to be offering a bit more than just the bar taps & obviously with your machine you have the ability to do this, maybe start with items that are bar related like coasters that will complement the beer taps & could be done in the same style or pattern.
All the taps I could see were walnut, what about other woods? Walnut might not suit the bar décor but other woods might.
As for wording I’m not keen on this “ blocks of walnut I'm lucky enough to have found” to me it sounds like you just fell over them accidentlly lol.
I would be more inclined to say something like ” the taps have been produced from carefully selected blocks of walnut chosen for their unusual grain pattern” or something along those lines, makes them sound a little bit special which I am sure they are anyway.
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