Since you are welcoming critics......
"Tomorrows Leaders Today"
Since that is just mish mashing with all the carving under it, rendering the text illegible for the most part... Maybe if you put a rectangle around the Leaders thing and cut off all the lettering, etc that is in the rectangle so that the Leaders thing really stands out. If you think about it, that is really the message, not the stuff underneath.
And, this is where I get real nit picky (I have a license, I am over 65). It is not DFX. It is:
Data eXchange Format. DXF.
A quick google search does not turn up any known file type of dfx. I know, it is much, much easier to speak dfx than dxf. It sort of rolls off the tongue much nicer.
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